Sunday, February 20, 2005

Slow Dawn [shintai haiku]

slow dawn -
squeezing the morning out
of a toothpaste tube


Written / posted 10 February 2005 in the WHC workshop; selected for display in the WHC Showcase on 19 February 2005. [And to think I wrote this at a sleepy moment upon arriving at work...] I thought it was senryu, but I guess it's not.

1 comment:

aa said...

nice senryu ella.